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Yannis Helios's avatar

Keep going, Shane! You did well removing all bias. Your writing will become even better.

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Shane Melaugh's avatar

Thank you!

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Issa A.'s avatar

Yes, please!

Reflecting back from a reader’s perspective: I can feel when a piece is alive or not. This felt alive, and therefore, easy and flowy to read.

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Shane Melaugh's avatar

That's great to hear. Thank you for this feedback!

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